Your scenography is well thought out. But to better see your lanterns ask to lower the light … and it will be more consistent with the story. For your next show, do the necessary to be more in the dark.
I like when acts have a story to tell us. Too often it’s just a technical demonstration and it’s a shame. Here, we find a character, an intrigue, an evolution in the history. We pass from the illusion, to the contact juggling and to the balance of a spinning top. In short, here is a different act that can appeal to all audiences.
Great act and very original … nice ideas and beautiful props.
But I suggest you find a teacher of body language.